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听《爸爸的梦想》有感, 为原版远方译写
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2 W$ P4 W6 ^/ Q; [2 h "Father's Dream" & Y2 U. M; V1 S% {
-Happy Father's Day4 Y) n! {7 I$ {) m {" q) N; b- ~
作词:原版远方 作曲:谭锦明+ @9 r) q* ?3 l8 B
配器:于 洋 男声首唱:于 洋 女声首唱:小卵石 H0 p$ K. P2 U# [2 s+ j
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远方湖面,白帆络绎,小艇荡漾,傍晚骤雨,巨虹悬空。入夜小镇,一年一次,音乐节日,顿时,异域庞克,Rock飞乐,倒是激情,喧闹异常。几近午夜,竟彩焰升空,似银柳翠空,仲夏艳丽,簇拥万情。5 v" _6 l/ B. L8 C8 t. U# F0 g
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当人去街宁,打开邮箱,久疏而觉格外亲。一支歌曲,来自远方,不亦乐乎,此君好文,原版笔墨,力透荧屏,未曾晤面,共鸣无限,神交网路,其乐融融。迫不及待,点击便听,链接奉上:5 a, e+ Z) V& s& \. L
( O2 x* t- a% y( r6 o一支歌曲如不能一气连听三遍者,不为上乘。而此曲,乐起悠扬,初起清新童稚,转而深沉励志,继而情深哲理。墨沾父子深情游子志怀,写尽海外学子思母相思。春夏秋冬,山高水长,听来复去,已韵入胸膛。
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当感动涟涟,润浸眼眶,就不得不让心中的连动,留在了纸上。- _# {- J' q4 y5 G" t
是否,就它,叠一纸鹤,放飞而去,捎给远方。
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于洋男声版:
2 C8 S0 T+ c; l) I9 M! N0 `http://www.liuxueliange.com/bbdmx-2010-yuyang.htm
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0 p8 G5 f9 i7 i- Z! n( VComposer: Tan Jinming8 Z- t2 t& |: c# ~3 T
Orchestration: Yu Yang, O( ^ b6 O* ?7 u- a6 j( x' h6 I
Singer Male : Yu Yang( k$ c7 |8 R2 ~5 {0 x. [3 T3 f
Singer Female: Xiao Ruan-shi, v4 B3 y+ C! y/ B% V3 Q
《爸爸的梦想》-祝父亲节快乐!
8 O1 M8 G% V4 k7 _ `3 Z5 K3 x 小时候 爸爸带我登上山岗
?/ Y2 p/ `/ |; {1 G+ v# W望着远处青山 说起儿时的梦想
: V" Q+ F! E# g# e$ r2 V& H为求学 远走他乡 独自来到西湖旁
$ Z4 H2 {6 }- {: k O, G$ q/ ~9 w5 [那是传说中的人间天堂
/ z9 O8 A3 ] e. {The first mounting onto the hill, me a kid, very little,
/ w9 y' J0 B$ E1 Z2 Khills, hills, and hills still, but dreams of a child never old.
8 g9 e- Y) W x/ }; W: f# j' Sa student, by the Lake of West, lonesome moonlight at waterfront, laid.
: _0 @# K3 c! Ua legend told, so many years, and love story buried in a tower, Lei
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小时候 爸爸带我回到家乡& a% H# S+ R7 m! R# o" [3 a
重温昔日小屋 说起心中的希望' ]7 H" M& E" ]+ }, I
好男儿 志在四方 北京纽约去远航
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Many times, we back home, hands of his, and mine hold, Deep hopes,
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. I/ m9 \9 L7 o) IGood boy, go, across the oecean and see the world, & y: F0 }1 N; F% x9 h) P9 z
Beijing, NewYork, voyage, A map paint, a Globe, 1 f8 R# ^9 N; f/ U$ g& n
trips are short, but journey is long, steps to the hopes printed on the road. * U& z y. e) g5 W
4 P, k# v: H4 u9 K十年寒窗 有了梦就有了力量$ |: L# h" E& E' T& }9 b; ]
坚定着方向带着期望
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这就是传说中的世界之窗
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on my desk into a window, tall and long 5 {; V4 K& h7 ?1 u& B& u0 u! u
my dreams milks my will, as rocks in the wall,
0 Q3 E9 A/ g- \$ K5 @# B2 Y# v6 Rfirm footprints, cries in NewYork streets so aloud, echos knocks empty windows
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飞过蓝天,飞过海洋外面的世界靠自己闯
. o+ p$ d1 R) n; @5 N记不住阴晴,记不住圆缺却记得爸爸鬓角的白发
* c! K9 n6 v; u% W# H: FEagles loves blue in the sky, as the sails-man loves waves in the sea.5 W2 Y# J( ~/ q% E' c
Sunshine days summer, moonlight nights long in a fall, a world too big to see, A8 v) z% ^5 s; \/ K
Summers greet falls, as winters kisses the spring's lips,
5 k3 Q0 V o5 z% f3 y% ?Moon moves slow in dark clouds, falling leaves, black hair in whites.
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3 Z# p) o3 C4 ]$ v山不再高,路不再长
; q5 H8 b1 T8 l3 n, y1 a& J一串串脚印伸向远方
( l+ v7 f! o4 W6 ?5 M! q! D8 U忘记了悲欢,忘记了离合4 E" @3 J; T2 S5 q1 C2 T# J( M
却忘不了爸爸儿时的梦想+ W% W8 e" @) a4 ]6 R) _7 U
Roads in the country, a novel tells hills never grow,
* Y2 W$ |: b* q4 d8 z+ k5 jfootprints on trips, mark all maps, a home of hopes down the hills, 5 V5 I* g% E/ g( c5 I4 T) z$ M, F
Happy tears, hugs n a girl, goodbyes n memories make us old,
1 q3 s5 u0 ?7 I8 b4 g0 ?Daddy's hope, Dreams of sorrows, A story be told, / R0 M# b8 X2 C
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