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3 z& v# R# m, B; F: J# y原版远方《留学恋歌》原创系列-译写+ Y9 G6 u3 Y; ?  X+ O

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【序】-应邀为一国际华人某医学协会写一首会歌。写给为人类生命医学做贡献的华人医生及医学科学家们。- i6 l0 |# J. M/ H5 ^+ H+ o
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9 X2 b& w3 M0 z$ \. e【译记】
& p" T, H  P( c# t/ [-He wrote the original one in Chinese. E version, done without delay after read his text. Above lines made me feel it's a song devoted to some Chinese Doctors and scientists whose work contributed to the life science of mankind, from this side of the ocean.
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) X% K( K& J; r" p4 L! e原版远方, -He writes authentically, only when he sees something emotional, and touching his heart. I did once, when the quake hit the Wen-chuan China 2008, really hard to look at the lines as there were tears in the eyes...

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"A bridge built, called miracle"
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走遍天涯 追寻梦想
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让无悔的青春闪烁光芒
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Sun shines from south to north, we dream a dream, " g% j, B7 Q9 J, W% ~. E
in darkest nights, stars like Angle's eyes, blinks bravo,$ ?% d- g/ F2 I" U' @1 x
shines the hope, in every pause, and every cells( L5 ~& C, }8 J. ~( ]/ H
shines, forever, A pretty girl in spring,  morning, brings a miracle, / U5 ~& |3 Y7 e0 o8 o0 C

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肩负使命 为人类健康
5 N) n! `% O! L+ k5 c4 p$ y1 L天使的温暖救死扶伤
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Our hearts beat young, never old, ; X( T1 _! o5 j$ Y& u: F  R
On our shoulders, the spring morning dew,  & S- L& f) s; `
Like waves cares the land, Oh, spring girl( I  j7 L6 u2 Z+ G0 [9 h2 f/ f
Angle's lips warm, sweet, never cold
3 W/ |' t# r3 Q0 @- @: c, SShe sings a song, that make you strong, when u weakened, and poor, " |6 y4 \. j; [1 `) T
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架起连通中西的桥梁
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拼搏创新造就成功殿堂
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Across East and West, A bridge, we built, called miracle,
6 i' c2 @1 a- m' oWe walk in schools, we talk to fruits in the garden full,
# E9 I+ s/ I6 dWe try and discover, the Gold, in a century well,
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: m! r7 r8 H. u- \Hand in hand, time grow old, we go, Oh,
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Photo, by 四川 爱思网 石川先生,Authorized by 24en.com, zhou
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【译后的话】赠此次 8 H( ?! X& A6 t! z. ~

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$ |! w5 ~- n6 o. D, T# l! Y9 B安大略省 大专院校 汉语辩论大赛 的同学们和评委老师誌念!# c! }7 r, {( `) J5 O
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Yesterday, I read one text message from one of the Cyber-freinds who wrote 6 g4 j5 _5 C/ U: h4 @: |
many songs and poems in ChinaGate, 中国文学城, 北美较大华语网,his name is: 原版远方, I did once his song, during the 中国汶川震灾!/ U) D5 G: J: r

8 V6 r0 A3 \. Z/ \8 G1 G 今天的论题,使我想起了他!他邀我试译,一首汉语歌词。受你们论辩的激情和活力的激励,我一气呵成,成了一首 【译写】-汉诗英韵. "A bridge, built, called miracle" 赠给我在本次活动中, 遇见的所有同学和评委老师们,
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以致纪念!
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Read original,
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周末译趣
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小战士,一语
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March 19, 2010

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good, but why people doesnt comment?
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-3-29 17:00 | 显示全部楼层

Maybe they don't really like it!

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; o7 U- D" ]2 z+ a  F( kI don't know, maybe people are shy? Maybe people don't really enjoy it!   p. @0 _2 h" R  s- P2 s
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